Sunday, September 25, 2011
Ashes ashes we all fall down
"why you gotta be so mean?" Taylor Swift
In the story Barn Burning, Abner, who is the father of Sarty, is portrayed as more of a “thing” than a human. This is because humans have emotions, feelings, and forms of mercy. However the author does not give portray as Abner being a human being emotionally. The author always describes Abner in the forms of metal such as tin and iron, and describes his hands as claws. These images give off the picture of something that is anything but human. Still he feels the obvious emotion of hatred, which leads his destructiveness, but it seems to have overwhelmed every other emotion. Throughout the story he abuses his family with no regret or hesitation, meaning he doesn't feel the smallest amount of sorrow as a normal human would. This makes his image darken just as his personality is, almost to an evil or corrupt level.
The diction that describes Abner is sophisticated and mean. Abner is describes as very precise, from him walking to how he conducts fires, so much that the author describes him being similar to a clock, which is a tool that exemplifies precision. The way by which he manipulated his son is an example of sophistication, while the tone and ways he talks to people is an example of how he is mean.
The obvious symbols from the story are the burnings or acts of destruction Abner commits. Abner does this because he fought in the Civil War, became traumatized during it, and came back to work alongside the slave he risked his life to keep under him. This makes him hateful towards the social class system because he doesn’t want to be owned as slaves are. The fire is a symbol of revolt against the people who are better off than him or who boss him. Yet the fire is also a symbol of him having control because there are not many things in his life that he does control.
Barn Burning
William Faulkner characterizes Abner Snopes as an antagonistic, “gray [eyed]” father looking to vindicate those who have done him injustice by burning their possessions. Although branded as emotionless, Abner uses fire to vehemently burn down and completely destroy the barns of his enemies. The fire deeply contrasts the image Faulkner makes of Abner; passionate, fiery, and flexible caused by a stiff, cold, and detached man. Faulkner further symbolizes Abner's personality through the “black, flat, and bloodless” shadow against the “starlit road.” This scenery sets a perfect mood for Abner's act of indifferent violence towards his son. The determined, unsympathetic, and aggressive “drive” of Abner to burn barns is ultimately the reason he is shot and killed.
Abner's ruthless personality is recognized as he “struck [his son] with the flat of his hand.” This unwarranted abuse was as if he had “killed a horse fly”; an exhibit of Abner's constant reliance on violence for unnecessary punishments. The exaggerated punishment occurred because of what Abner assumed Sarty would have told the judge, not for what his son had actually done. Faulkner's juxtaposition of Abner hitting his son contrasted with Abner striking a mule shows his lack of sympathy and indifference to his kin in the midst of getting away from the law. The allegiance to familial blood that Abner physically strikes into his son also exposes his hypocrisy; a father's callous infidelity to his son versus a son's forced devotion to his father. Faulkner describes this occurrence as “without fear or anger”; thus further characterizing Abner Snopes as a weathered and indifferent man intent on vengeance.
Barn Burning - Sarty
Barn Burning
Sarty starts to see how his father acts towards other people. He is seen as the child that is the closest to Abner in appearance, actions, and thoughts. But Sarty is at the age to ask questions and notice more than people believe. He begins to tell the truth at the courthouse but is quickly silenced by his father. After Sarty leaves his family, he walks through a forest, a dark place, and sees the light of dawn. Sarty walks under the "liquid sliver voices" of the forest animals and becomes baptized from the prejudices of his family into the beginning of a man who he wants to be and has seen from other people around him.
Abner's Fiery Desire for Power
Abner's poverty and status of servitude instills a deep feeling of inadequacy and a sense of being powerless. Abner must attempt to satiate this lack of power with destructive acts that put him into control. These acts are heartless acts of arson, meant to be a type of rebellion against those who are above Abner in society. Abner, throughout the course of the story, burns two barns. This is his way of trying to obtain power. No one is able to prevent him from committing arson and large chases are brought against him to capture Abner after the deed. When he successfully escapes, Abner develops a sense of control and power because the wealthy landowners are unable to stop his destruction. This satisfies Abner's feelings of inadequacy while also granting him a sense of control over his life and those around him.
Barn Burning;
Like clockwork.
Everything about this story has a repetitious almost rhythmic feel about it. When Sartoris begins to describe his father, he describes him as “harshly cut form tin”. This makes him seem more like a robot than like that of a man. Importantly, at the beginning of the story a clock is mentioned that is taken with them everywhere that they go even though it does not work. The story makes allusions to Abner being just like that clock. Several times Abner is described with the term cold; this is often used to describe someone that is emotionless, unforgiving, or lacking compassion. Abner is related to time itself in that situation, in the sense that he, like time, is unforgiving and uncompassionate. Abner’s hurt foot is like the clock’s inability to tick. Both of these are important wounds to their respective bearers. These wounds are representations of their owner’s inability to progress; the clock cannot move forward to tell time, while Abner’s foot is a symbol of his inability to run from his problems and his inability to move forward. The hurt foot is also a link to his past. As a confederate “soldier” he was shot in the heel after stealing a horse. With his hurt foot he cannot escape this past and will forever be unable to move on from the time before the end of the civil war. In the end his deficiency was the end of him, he was unable to adapt so he was decommissioned.
His deficiencies play into his hatred for the upper-class, as he cannot move forward and he sees them as enemies. He is stuck as a minute-hand on a clock, forever stuck in a past time amidst a time that no longer has a place for the likes of him.
Dirty Abner!
In this story, Abner is portrayed as an inhumane “object”. Descriptions, such as “ironlike”, “cut ruthlessly from tin”, “hand like a curled claw” help portray his physical appearances which classifies him as inhumane. These descriptions hint how harsh and odd Abner is when it comes to his life and family members. For example, Sarty, around 10 years old, is repeatedly smacked by his father, an act of harshness. The author also implies that he abuses his wife and other family members, and all of these implications help form the image of the inhumane father. Throughout the story, the actions he commits are ruthless, and emotionless. All of these ideas are tied in together by the author to establish him as a cruel, inhumane animal.
The author also makes use of diction to represent Abner as somewhat educated person who is willing to manipulate people for his own benefit. When he tells Sarty to “stick to your own blood”, the author portrays his selfishness and manipulative habits. Even though he has committed arson, he is warning his son to not spill his secrets. His diction also represents his heartless features. Just the way he speaks with his wife inspires fear into her heart and the other family members. No one dares to defy him because of the threat implied in his voice. Even though he responds in a cool and composed manner, his diction implies danger and harm.
A major symbol in this story is the destruction of property by Abner (barn burning and rug destruction). These actions symbolize Abner’s hatred for the class system that was basically established. Being a confederate, Abner firmly believed that he was worth more than a black person, and he wishes to establish that fact by causing harm to the rich class’s properties. Even though he is considered a slave, he establishes the fact that his mind and actions cannot be restrained and controlled. Thus, the destruction of their property is an act of rebellion to establish his authority and exercise his free will.
Barn Burning
Abner also burns barns because he wants to feel something for once. Though the story flows as though it is told from Sarty's point of view, the reader does get the impression that Abner uses physical abuse to keep his wife and children from doing things he does not want them to do. The language used in the telling of the story also indicates that Abner is generally a cold, unfeeling person around his family. Burning the barns of his oppressors might be the only way he can feel any sort of emotion, whether it is fear, joy, or the pure rush of adrenaline that comes from knowing he could get caught and killed for what he is doing. The one element that bears a striking contrast to Abner's lust for control is the fact that fire is so uncontrollable. Perhaps knowing that he is the creator of this fire is his way of asserting control.
-Sarah Meirose.
PS: Exactly 295 words = winning.